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The samples posted on this web site are anonymous and always more than two years old at the time of posting.
If you are thinking about using my service but are not yet convinced, I invite you to send your rough draft to my email, drrobertedinger@gmail.com, so that I can edit and enhance your first paragraph at no charge or obligation. Most of my potential clients who receive the first paragraph, go on to commission me to work on the entire statement.
Graduate School Personal Statement Samples, Statement of Purpose Writing and Editing, Professional Service
Statistics Master's Degree, PHD
Sample 1st Paragraph for the Master's Degree in Statistics
My fascination with Statistics came with the realization that the applications are almost limitless. The expert application of statistical techniques has the potential to beneficially affect almost every aspect of people’s lives and I seek to become an expert practitioner, researcher and teacher in this field of study. I find that the mix of highly technical and the ‘soft, artistic’ skills of intuition and subtle interpretation that are required of an expert in the field make the subject an excellent fit for me. I now seek to acquire the high-level skills and knowledge to enable me to achieve my goals and to maximize my utility in the world.
Sample 1st Paragraph for the Master's Degree in Statistics
Born in Uzbekistan and raised in Russia, I came to the USA at the age of 18 as a political refugee. A citizen since 2010, I live with my family in Florida. This coming May, 2020, I will finish medical school at the University of Florida and I hope to be selected for a residency program in Dermatology. Looking forward to practicing medicine in America for many decades to come, I find my special focus on Dermatology to be especially satisfying and engaging. In addition to the rigors of medical school, for the past year, I have served as a Clinical Research Associate at the Moffitt Cancer Center in Tampa, assisting with non-melanoma skin cancer research and treatment. This experience will help me to hit the ground running and excel in your program.