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I hope to be accepted to the particularly distinguished and competitive EDD Program in Leadership and Innovation at XXXX State University for a variety of reasons in addition to the fact that I very much want to study in Arizona. Most of all, I am attracted to the sheer excellence of your program, its mission, and the way in which the interests of your faculty are in areas where I hope to excel and greatly expand my knowledge base and professional capacity so to make my maximum contribution to education. In particular, I very much appreciate XSU’s pioneering efforts to take the lead in the fullest adoption possible of the cutting-edge of technology harnessed to pedagogical advancement.