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My name is Dr. Robert Edinger (PHD Social Ethics, USC, 1995). I help applicants to graduate school and employment positions from all over the world. I only do my best, taking the time to reflect on your story and do internet research on your behalf. My service is quite different from other statement writing services for admission applicants. I am the little guy on the web, not a big business like most of my competitors. You deal directly with me and I answer all of your questions completely free of charge. I am solely responsible for helping you to produce a statement that will get you accepted to a master's or doctoral program. If you send me your information and I accept you as a new client, I will go to work on your material within 24 hours. I usually draft an introductory paragraph at no charge or obligation so as to give you a better idea of how I can help. Let's get started! Please note that the examples on the web site are anonymous and at least three years old at the time of posting.
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- Free Resume/CV Edit with Premium Statement Service until December 31!
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to all my clients and potential clients at StatementWritingHelp.com ! Your professional writer and editor Dr. Robert Edinger is working straight through Christmas and New Years festivities to help with your application to graduate school or a fellowship program. As a gesture of solidarity and good will, for every new premium order that is placed on my web site for a Personal Statement or Statement of Purpose, I would be happy to edit your resume or CV and track my revisions at no extra charge, through December 31, 2024! Free Consultations! drrobertedinger@gmail.com Free Resume/CV Edit with Premium Statement Service Wishing you the Happiest of Holiday Seasons!
- Thesis & Dissertation Editing Support, Enhancement, Free Trial!
Academic collaboration at its best: a group of dedicated students working together with laptops and books, benefiting from thesis and dissertation editing support and enhancement services. While my principal focus is on Personal Statements, I also work on master's and doctoral academic material, editing, enhancing, and occasionally ghostwriting material for my clients. I edit and enhance academic text, less frequently, I also draft some material from scratch although rarely. In short, I am open to improving any academic material that the client wants to have edited and improved. I would be happy to edit the first one or two paragraphs of your material and track the changes at no charge. This would provide you with a better understanding of the way and extent to which I can help with your document. Please feel free to contact me by email and let me know how I might be able to help. Thesis & Dissertation Editing Support, Enhancement, Free Trial! drrobertedinger@gmail.com Your Online Academic Editor, Thesis and Dissertation Help, Dr. Robert Edinger with Son David
- Passionate Japanese Jazz Musician Seeks M.A. in Jazz Performance
Aspiring jazz musicians find harmony and inspiration during a vibrant orchestra practice, guided by an enthusiastic conductor. Japanese Jazz Musician Seeks MA in Jazz Performance I was born and raised in a small town named Yanai in Japan. Growing up in a non-musical family, I was fortunate to learn the Saxophone. I learned a great deal about technique and about classical music, and I started teaching saxophone as an instructor for the Yamaha Corporation. It was one of my saxophone students who introduced me to jazz, and I was soon fully immersed in the many colorful ways to express my music afforded by Jazz. I came to New York with a passion for jazz and. began studying at the New School, absorbing everything around me and developing my voice in jazz, earning my BFA in jazz performance. At 31, I am now musically mature and have made New York my home. I see New York as the capital of the Art World and the Musical Center of the universe. I feel strongly that the ____ School is the perfect match for my elevated level of motivation and I am incredibly inspired by the creative dynamics of your faculty. I see ____ as the place where I could best excel with my creativity fully flourishing. A talented Japanese jazz musician envisions a future in jazz performance, blending technology with tradition as he pursues an M.A. in Jazz. I have visited the school, and the vibes are explosive. I hope to earn the M.A. in Jazz Performance and benefit from the experience of being part of your vibrant academic community. I am most keen to build lifetime friendships with other musicians from around the world, helping each other to refine how we play and compose. I have become highly disciplined, and I am looking forward to learning all that I can about Jazz about Jazz. I look forward to becoming a bookworm for the next couple of years, developing my voice in jazz, composing, and playing the saxophone. Aspiring Japanese jazz musician passionately plays the saxophone, preparing for a statement of purpose for an M.A. in Jazz Performance. Being a Japanese jazz musician is challenging since it is claimed that Japanese jazz artists can't swing. It is here that I want to make my mark in the art world, putting the swing into Japanese Jazz. I look forward to an extensive study of music in culture in your program to better understand how music is rooted in society and social psychology. It is true that Japanese people; and my parents are exemplary in this, consider it shameful to make one's deepest expressions fully public. Thus, I see myself as a musical pioneer dedicated to the quest of liberating Japanese Jazz. The Japanese people are fascinated with Jazz, and I want to visit Japan with frequency, bringing with me the unbridled happiness and unbearable lightness of New York--to share with my people. Japanese Jazz Musician Seeks MA in Jazz Performance
- DMA Doctor of Musical Arts Orchestral Conducting Personal Statement
Guiding the orchestra with precision, embodying the art of conducting. I grew up in Port-au-Prince, Haiti where the styles of music are compa, voodoo, racine, zouk and troubadour. I did not know much about classical music until I attended l’Ecole de Musique Sainte Trinité (Holy Trinity Music School), the most well-established music school in Haiti, where I was given the privilege to begin my musical training. I started learning the violin at the age of eight. After joining the National Philharmonic Orchestra and earning an advanced certificate at the Festival Summer Music Camp in 2002, I became a violin instructor at Holy Trinity. At that point I felt like my musical skills and knowledge were limited; but my devotion to music earned me a full scholarship to come to the United States to further my musical studies at the University of XXXX in 2015. Aspiring orchestral conductor focuses on crafting a compelling personal statement, with musical inspiration close at hand. In America I was exposed to a wider range of distinctive styles in the orchestral repertoire and had the opportunity to see, for the first time in my life, a professional orchestra–the Duluth Superior Symphony. I remember at one of their concerts they performed Beethoven’s Symphony No. 3 “Eroica,” and that piece began to speak to me in a way I’d never experienced. I anxiously listened, and at the moment--in the first movement’s recapitulation where the C sharp becomes D flat enharmonically (which Beethoven had revolutionarily written at the end of a main theme in E flat in the opening); everything seemed to open. From that moment forward, I have wanted to create music such as this. and learn to excel as a conductor. Aspiring conductor thoughtfully reviews sheet music, preparing a compelling personal statement amidst the harmony of strings in a rehearsal space. I have maintained a vast array of musical preferences and taken advantage of numerous opportunities for personal development. Since 2016, I’ve been volunteering as a staff member at the Festival Summer Music Camp in Haiti where I coach chamber music and teach music theory, conducting sectionals, and violin lessons. I also had the opportunity to apply my conducting skills and techniques by conducting the intermediate chamber orchestra (Petit Orchestre de Chambre). This past summer, I was placed in charge of the ensemble, artistically and administratively. Due to my aptitude for choosing the appropriate repertoire and having the ability to adjust musically to such difficult conditions, especially following the devastating earthquake in, 2009, I believe that my experience as a conductor has been enormously beneficial to the music program at Holy Trinity, confirming my dedication to continue studying conducting. I want to earn my DMA in orchestral conducting so that I can give back to other Haitian musicians. I feel strongly that the University of XXXX's diverse campus and student body and creative and dynamic faculty is a perfect match for my elevated level of motivation. I am highly aware of the superb reputation of your school, and my conversations with several of your alumni have served to deepen my interest in attending. I am looking forward to learning a great deal more about conducting than I already know with Professor XXXX. I hope you will give me the privilege of continuing my studies at your singularly distinguished institution. DMA Doctor of Musical Arts Orchestral Conducting Personal Statement
- PsyD Program Personal Statement PTSD Passion in California
I am applying to your competitive PsyD Program at the XXXX because I am convinced that my drive and determination will enable me to excel. I have a great passion for research in psychology, particularly in the areas of post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD). Now thirty-six, psychology is a career change for me, a new professional beginning. Married and divorced, I spent 10 years in the mortgage business with my family in the small California town of XXXX where I grew up. After my marriage failed, I completed my bachelor’s degree in two years and then sold my home and moved to the city (Tarzana). I like to think of myself as a compassionate woman; and that my concern for the suffering of others is what has propelled me towards the study of psychology and the completion of both my bachelor's and master's degrees in this field. I have found my calling in life helping those who suffer from mental health issues and challenges. Now, I keenly look forward to continuing in my studies and completing the terminal degree in my field at the XXXX and attaining an innovative foundation upon which I will be able to make my maximum contribution to our discipline. I am especially passionate about therapeutic initiatives centered on the concept of mindfulness, particularly with respect to its potential for evoking positive changes in brain chemistry. A young professional sits confidently in a well-lit office, ready to assist with PsyD program personal statements, specializing in addressing PTSD. I am also passionately engaged with the issue of how we, as psychology professionals, might best go about helping to erase the stigma that is all too often associated with mental health services, particularly among certain ethnic groups, Latinos, for example who figure quite prominently into mental health assessments and services here in California. I am working with my Rosetta Stone for Spanish, and I hope to continue to make rapid improvement in my Spanish skills so that I might eventually be able to use this language professionally. I became a member of the Society for Theoretical and Philosophical Psychology because I am a thinker who loves to ask questions and a firm believer in the importance of balance between mind, body and soul for optimal health, studying our own past in order to prepare ourselves for the future at the same time that we learn to savor each moment of the present. I am most fascinated with the human mind, its capabilities and limitations, and the debate between dualism and monism. At the center of my focus is the mind's ability to heal the body and the role played by spirituality. A focused student works diligently on a personal statement for a PsyD program in California, driven by a passion for helping Spanish speakers dealing with PTSD. A sense of debt that I feel to my community and nation has also helped to propel my interest in post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD), especially but not exclusively among our soldiers returning from combat in places like Afghanistan. The fact that I personally have no military experience or any military family members only reinforces the sense that I have of wanting to give something back to those who have sacrificed so much. For years now, I have invested a great deal of time, energy, and heartfelt reflection in the area of PTSD and I want to build a lifetime focus in this area of psychology, to practice and publish about the great challenge that PTSD represents for our society and to do everything that I personally can to respond to this challenge. I will be finishing my master's degree in December of 2014 and hope to being studying in your program right away, in January of 2015. The focus of my master's Program has been in Marriage and Family Therapy, and I want to remain engaged with this area as a lifetime focus. Mental health issues are best dealt with when one is not alone, and I feel special empathy for those who must wrestle with mental health issues in the context of a failing marriage often aggravated by the stigma associated with mental health issues. I want to devote my life to helping everyone that comes to me for support to feel less alone in their struggle. If I could help them to save their marriage, this would be ideal. Several years back I was struck by an image of the “Marlboro Man,” a US soldier in sustained combat in Fallujah, Iraq. He had been firing his canon for about 24 hours when the photo was taken, mud, blood spattered all over his face, a Marlboro cigarette dangling from his lips. A young white man from our state of Kentucky who volunteered to go to Iraq to defend our freedoms as our government saw fit; although he sustained no major physical injuries, he would never be the same. Most importantly, his case is not at all unique; there are tens of thousands of similar cases in America. He came into the spotlight and attracted press attention to his story only because of the award-winning photo. The Marlboro Man returned to Kentucky to pick up the pieces of his marriage to his high-school sweetheart. Within a couple of years, she would leave him because of his nightmares where he would sometimes half strangle her in his sleep. Alone now, he keeps smoking and suffering. After earning my PsyD and beginning my practice, I intend to put the Marlboro Man photo on the wall in my office. I also plan to pay remarkably close attention to the issues surrounding PTSD and substance abuse/addictions. My central, long-term goal is to create my own non-profit organization to help our veterans. I have several ideas, and I am confident that they will mature as I make progress under your expert guidance towards completion of the PsyD Degree at ____. I have been profoundly inspired by the example set by such organizations as Puppies Behind Bars in New York, which rescues dogs from shelters to be trained by inmates and then given to veterans with PTSD. I find this model to be especially inspiring because of the broad scope of those who benefit, the inmates, the animals, and especially the veterans and their families. No organization such as Puppies Behind Bars exists yet in California. In fact, here in California there is a huge waiting list of veterans who need trained dogs. I am particularly passionate about the use of animals in therapy because they reach places that people sometimes are just unable to go, especially when the individual is otherwise all alone. This avenue of research and practice dovetails nicely with my volunteer work with the Society for the Prevention and Cruelty of Animals. Volunteer work is in fact central to my identity and mission. I also serve as a Court Appointed Special Advocate and participate in numerous events related to the care of children. Finally, I hope to engage professionally at some point with virtual reality as a complement to therapy. I see exposure therapy as a most promising resource, allowing the PTSD sufferer to go back and confront their trauma in a safe environment. Sometimes we need to face the monster under our bed to make it go away. I thank you for considering my application to your distinguished program at the XXXX. PsyD Program Personal Statement PTSD Passion in California
- LLM Regulatory and Environmental Compliance Law Indian Engineer
Aspiring Indian engineer poses confidently, embodying her dedication to pursuing an LLM in Regulatory and Environmental Compliance Law. The backdrop symbolizes her commitment to sustainable practices and legal expertise. I seek to continue struggling for success through enormous hard work and dedication to the task at hand; win or lose, I will have done the best I could under the circumstances, always maintaining moral integrity. Already an electrical engineer of some merit at 23, I want very much to go to law school. For me, the pursuit of law is motivated as much by spiritual concerns as economic ones. I aim at having a positive impact on a world under enormous threat from climate change. After distinguishing myself in my studies towards the LLM Degree, I hope to go on and earn the JD degree as well. I am highly motivated and focused. As an engineer, I understand the broad relevance of intellectual property law in today's world. But my youth is mirrored by the bounty of my intrigues, and I am also fascinated by and looking forward to the study of government law, the judicial system, criminal and civil, as well as corporate law—especially mergers and acquisitions. Young advocate for environmental justice, holding a potted plant and a flag, symbolizes dedication to sustainable development and cultural heritage in the pursuit of environmental law studies. Born in Mumbai, India, I was raised in the Middle East, primarily the UAE where my father was employed as a physician for an oil company. By the eighth grade, however, my father had passed away and we moved back to India. Living in India until 2006, I transferred credits earned by my undergraduate studies in Electrical Engineering from Mumbai University to ____ University, graduating in 2007 in Electrical and Computer Engineering at only twenty-one, and with a minor in philosophy. I began graduate school at____ that same fall of 2007 and graduated with my master's in electrical and computer engineering (MSECE) two years later. I am currently doing an online certificate course from ____ University in “Sustainable Energy Conversion and Storage,” a Certificate that will be complete by August of 2010. Making my fullest contribution to the advancement of Regulatory Environmental Compliance Law is my top, long-term priority. I see the study and practice of law as highly complementary to my career to date as an engineer. My intellectual fascinations range from government regulations through possibilities for an overhaul of the criminal justice system. I advocate for greater transparency in corporate mergers and acquisitions. I may decide to return to make my home in India and I could see myself ten years from now as a judge in the government of India. I am ambitious, thorough, relentless, and working for the prosecution holds out a lot of attraction for me. A young woman stands in a lush garden, carrying books and a variety of potted plants, symbolizing her commitment to environmental law. She embodies the blend of cultural heritage and modern education, showcasing her dedication to learning and protecting the environment. In addition to Hindi, Urdu, and English, I can also read, write, and speak Arabic. My French has become rusty. I have had vast privileges as a volunteer both here in America as well as back home in India. Some of my work here in America with minority girls at risk has been the most rewarding, especially as a youth mentor at the National Institute of Fitness Sciences, in Indianapolis, Indiana. I have been regularly active with the NSBE as well as IEEE and served as the general secretary of the Rotary Club’s Youth Wing in Mumbai. I am a board member of ECO solutions in Mumbai—solar/alternative—in a search for creative solutions that stem from Indian culture, such as distributing solar lamps to poor shopkeepers. I am proud to have been an advanced math tutor at Indiana University, as well as an instructor of complex educational software such as Mathxl, Matlab, Maple etc. I ask for the opportunity to bring my elevated levels of interdisciplinary energy to your esteemed program. Thank you for considering my application to your distinguished LLM program. LLM Regulatory and Environmental Compliance Law Indian Engineer
- JD Personal Statement Domestic Violence Protecting Women
A dedicated law student reviews her notes on domestic violence, emphasizing the importance of legal protection for women, symbolized by the scales of justice and gavel on her desk. I am the culmination of many victories and great challenges along the way, growing up on the south side of Chicago. The perils of our neighborhood plight—violence, prostitution, and debilitating poverty—are vivid in my memory. Thus, I sought escape, salvation, from a world beyond my reality, in books. My love for reading began and even continues with my mother reading to me at times; she has done this ever since I was a baby. This helped my reading skills to flourish early on so that I was reading at a Junior High level while still in Grade School. I also spent a lot of time making the track team. Running was an escape valve for my problems, especially my mother´s refusal to denounce and report my father´s violence, for so many years. It seems perfectly clear that my first interest in becoming a lawyer was in response to my desperation as a victim of domestic violence. Where my mother has been the victim, I have been the victim. And I always wanted to fight back. Still do. I want to struggle to strengthen laws that serve to protect women and their children from domestic violence. It was not until my college years that my mother finally divorced my father and transitioned to a new life, with my three younger siblings, an uneducated single mother lacking a work history. Yet my mother is a survivor, and she inspired me to complete college; thus, making me the first college graduate in my family. My accomplishment has even helped to inspire my mother´s return to college to complete her Education Degree. My childhood taught me many lessons but the most profound lesson of all is never to give up on one´s situation no matter how hopeless it may seem. A young professional reflects on her commitment to advocating for women's rights and protection against domestic violence, with law books and a justice statue symbolizing her dedication to legal empowerment. In my senior year of high school, a history teacher further inspired my interest in law and politics: his engaging method of teaching offered me a different paradigm for how to view the world and the impact that politics and laws had on my mundane life. I finally felt assured that I could make a difference in this world. Thus, in college, I studied Political Science and volunteered with the Rape Action Committee at Southern Illinois University. In my Senior year I received an opportunity to study abroad in Ghana. This adventure has afforded me a broader perspective on human nature as well as politics, allowing me to re-establish the borders of my own identity and culture. I completely immersed myself for a sustained period in African culture; a part of me that I regard as my greatest treasure. ´African´ American has taken on new meaning, flavor. A law student confidently presents her case during a mock trial, showcasing her dedication and advocacy skills essential for a JD personal statement. As I listened to the women in the refugee camp tell us about their daily lives I inquired into the protection of women’s rights. I was surprised to learn that laws prohibiting the sexual and physical abuse of women where either non-existent or not enforced. I was enraged and wanted to help them. And I intend to do so after graduating from Law School. I want to protect African women from rape, and help those who have been raped to recover, not only justice, but their soul as well. I look forward to bringing my diverse background to your program, along with my advanced communication skills and highest ambitions as a law school student dedicated to the protection of human rights. I have the right level of maturity at 25 to excel in Law School and I plan to devote myself full time to my studies, confident that I have the strength and tenacity to do excel in your program. JD Personal Statement Domestic Violence Protecting Women
- Free Consultations for the Graduate School Personal Statement
How is professional editing support useful for getting selected to competitive Graduate School programs? Personal Statement of Purpose Help for Graduate School Applicants I provide free consultations for applicants to graduate school who complete my interview form , which provides me with the basis for giving you guidance concerning what is important to include in your Personal Statement or Statement of Purpose for graduate school, and what is important to not include. Professional editing support can be immensely beneficial for several reasons: For as many applicants as possible, I provide a complimentary first paragraph to serve you as a model or guide, an example: Clear and Polished Writing . Editors ensure that your application is free of grammatical errors, typos, and awkward phrasing, making your writing clear and professional. Structured and Cohesive Content : An editor helps you to organize your thoughts and ideas in a logical and cohesive manner, which is crucial for making a strong impression on the Admissions Committee. Tailored Content : Using a responsible editor assures that you tailor your application to highlight the most relevant experiences and skills that align with the specific graduate program's requirements and values. Enhanced Persuasiveness : A talented editor can improve the persuasive elements of your writing, ensuring that your motivations, passion for nursing, and commitment to the field are compellingly conveyed. Objective Feedback : Professional editors provide objective feedback, helping you to see your work from an outsider's perspective and identify areas for improvement that you might have overlooked. Confidence Boost : Knowing that your application has been reviewed and refined by a professional can give you added confidence when submitting your materials. Overall, professional editing can significantly enhance the quality of your application, increasing your chances of standing out in a competitive pool. Good luck with your application journey for graduate school! 🌟 Is there anything specific you're working on for your application that you'd like more guidance with? Free Consultations by Dr. Robert Edinger drrobertedinger@gmail.com Free Consultations for the Graduate School Personal Statement Free Consultations for the Graduate School Personal Statement of Purpose
- Academic Editor Dr. Robert Edinger Support with your Writing & Editing
Get Professional Help for Your Academic Needs I want to assist you with your academic work, including doctoral dissertations, master's theses, term papers, and more. My goal is to make your life easier by enhancing your projects. I offer to edit the first half-page of your work at no charge, with no obligation. This is a way for me to promote my service while helping you improve your academic writing. Academic Editor Dr. Robert Edinger Why Choose My Services? Providing effective academic support is my passion. I understand the pressures that come with academic deadlines. That's why I'm committed to offering high-quality editing services to students. Many times, students feel overwhelmed and unsure about their writing. My aim is to guide you through your academic journey. I have extensive experience in various fields. Whether you need help with formatting, grammar, or clarity, I can assist you. I offer not only editing but also ghostwriting services, if needed. Let’s work together to make your academic work shine! How I Can Assist You Editing and Proofreading One essential aspect of academic writing is clarity. My editing and proofreading services ensure your work is error-free and easy to read. I pay close attention to grammar, punctuation, and overall structure. Each document needs a polished appearance for successful submission. Ghostwriting Services If you’re struggling to put your ideas into words, I also provide ghostwriting services. You can share your thoughts, and I’ll help you articulate them academically. This service ensures your voice remains present while making your ideas clear and coherent. Tailored Guidance Every academic project is unique. I tailor my approach based on your specific requirements. Whether you are preparing a dissertation or a term paper, I’ll adapt my services to meet your needs. Additionally, I can offer insights into research methodologies and argumentation strategies. The Importance of a Good Mentor Engaging with a mentor can significantly impact your academic success. Mentorship can guide you in understanding complex concepts and navigating institutional expectations. As an academic editor, I not only enhance your writing but can also offer advice on broader academic strategies. Tools and Resources Recommended Tools for Academic Writing Using the right tools can enhance your writing process. Here are a few recommendations: Grammarly : A great tool for grammar checks and style suggestions. Hemmingway App : Perfect for making your writing concise and readable. Zotero : An excellent resource for managing citations and references. Leverage these tools and combine them with my editing services for the best results. Conclusion In summary, my services are designed to support your academic journey. With a focus on editing, ghostwriting, and tailored guidance, I aim to enhance your work. Academic writing doesn’t have to be daunting. I am here to help you succeed. Feel free to reach out to me with any academic questions you have! I look forward to assisting you in enhancing your academic work. Contact Information You can reach me at StatementWritingHelp.com or directly via email at drrobertedinger@gmail.com . Academic Editor Dr. Robert Edinger Support with your Writing & Editing Dr. Robert Edinger with Son David Academic Editor Dr. Robert Edinger
- BSW Personal Statement, Research and Practice, Elderly
BSW, Research and Practice Helping the Elderly Personal Statement of Purpose Examples My long-term career goal is to become the finest Social Worker possible. Thus, I am applying to the distinguished BSW Program at XXXX University. Your program is my first choice because of its sheer excellence. I was raised by a family that went through repeated periods of crisis during my childhood and adolescence due to issues that took me some time and effort to resolve. The traumatic experiences I endured as a young person helped strengthen me in the long term and guided me to a fulfilling career I can imagine: a social worker. After first earning the BSW, I hope to go on to earn the MSW. Throughout both programs, as much as possible, I look forward to focusing my research projects and practice on the elderly, family services, and children with disabilities since I am seeking a long and fulfilling career in Social Work with experience in various areas. BSW, Research and Practice Helping the Elderly Personal Statement Editing Service My passion for caring for the elderly began with caring for my ill grandmother and, eventually, my mother. I spent years caring for my mother, a dialysis patient, and I learned much about how to treat and comfort dialysis patients. There is a need for social workers in this area, and I am incredibly fortunate to have made a friend of my mother’s social worker. I have studied intensively on my own how so many of our elderly people have been left behind or marginalized, often as a result, at least in part, of language barriers. As a Latina who grew up speaking Spanish in the home, I am sympathetic to the plight of many who still struggle as I did as an adolescent, making a great effort that is necessary to learn to speak and write English well, and this will help me to be compassionate, and to empathize as well as communicate in both languages. In this way, I can help my clients fully use available resources if possible. I especially look forward to advocating for victims of domestic violence as a social worker in the decades to come, doing all I can to helping to liberate women from abusive relationships. I was once a victim of domestic violence, and I know how difficult it can be to free oneself from an abusive relationship. I will always be indebted to the social worker who helped me escape my tricky situation with an abusive partner. She believed in me, treated me with respect and dignity, and did not judge me. Instead, she inspired and empowered me to secure the resources needed for my kids and me to be safe. She was and will always be one of my principal inspirations in wanting to become a social worker. BSW, Research and Practice Helping the Elderly Personal Statement Writing Service As a career social worker, I want to treat all my clients with respect and dignity, helping them to achieve an enhanced sense of self-worth. It was through her that I learned how demanding but also how rewarding the career of a social worker is. My social worker helped me to understand that being a social worker is a selfless career, the primary reward of which is seeing one’s client safe, healthy, happy, and successful in what they set their mind to accomplish. My parents taught me that we didn’t come into this world just to be part of it but to make a difference by helping those in need without judging them or being self-interested. I have volunteered in several social-work-related positions over the last couple of years. I most enjoy helping people of diverse backgrounds and sectors of society, providing them with resources according to their needs. I have completed the prerequisite courses for application to an undergraduate social work program. I have also taken several classes in Social Work and have been familiarizing myself intensively with the ethical codes of responsibility that guide our profession. I have also carefully cultivated friendships with people who are social workers and am learning a great deal about the profession and the demands, responsibilities, and rewards associated with the field. Lately, I have been reading a book by Lenna Dominelli, “Introducing Social Work.” Reading her work helped me to appreciate how much more fully I love the idea of becoming a social worker for so many reasons, most of all the fulfillment that comes from helping others frankly and honestly and giving one’s all to make that all-important, positive difference in someone’s life. I currently serve as an AmeriCorps Student Ambassador through Riverside City College and volunteer in Health and Psychological Services. In this position, I encounter students from many diverse cultural, religious, and ethnic backgrounds. The job entails one-on-one conversations with students regarding their experiences and issues with health services and mental health counseling. I frequently connect with county public benefits coordinators, Cal-Fresh, assisting students with applications. I coordinate, plan, develop content, and schedule guest speakers to deliver presentations, workshops, or seminars. I engage with partners throughout the community to bring more resources to colleges. As part of my training, I have attended various lectures on courses, including Safe Talk and Seeking Success, helping me better understand the challenges faced by students in crisis. This opportunity has improved my organizational skills and has allowed me to put into practice what I have learned about the ethical principles of social work. I serve as the event coordinator for Alpha Gamma Sigma, and our mission is to give back to the community. We volunteer at operation safe house, magnolia rehab, habitat for humanity, and many other places. Volunteering allows us to give back to the community and help people from all kinds of backgrounds. I am also a member of the Humanities Club at Moreno Valley College. On Veteran’s Day, we prepared a BBQ; on Mother’s Day, we baked dinner and gave gifts. On Thanksgiving, we collected donations to prepare food baskets in collaboration with various local agencies and deliver them to needy families. I love volunteering and helping others. The absolute best gift that one can receive is to see someone’s grateful smile. We must learn what walking in someone else's shoes is like to help them achieve a purposeful, meaningful, and rewarding life. I’m no stranger to demanding schedules and deadlines since my experience working as a quality control lead helped me to organize, time manage and multitask quite effectively. I was expected to have 99% of the counts completed by the end of the shift. I was also responsible for systematically deleting thousands of non-existent products and submitting daily reports of our progress. I became adept at resolving issues through communication; thinking on my feet enabled me to diffuse tricky situations and resolve disagreements to everyone’s satisfaction. I passionately believe in equality and the importance of diversity in the workplace. Working while studying has taught me discipline, sacrifice, and strict prioritization of my time. I am frugal and have money saved for my education. My central focus is earning the BASW, which is my number 1 priority. I intend to work only as far as it is comfortable to do so after enrolling in your program, and I will dedicate all my time, 24-7, to excel and give my all. I look forward to making myself available for all field practicums in the senior year, again, my top priority. I am thankful that I have the support of all my family to achieve my career goal of becoming a professional social worker. This will be a triumph for my family as well. I could not be more highly motivated to better the lives and prospects of elderly individuals and their families, especially those with scant resources. I have gained many valuable insights from my past experiences with inspirational moments that have fed my passion for progress and human uplifting. I enjoy developing strategies for realizing my full potential, and I want to help others do so as well. Thank you for considering my application. BSW Personal Statement, Research and Practice, Elderly
- Master’s Communication Science and Disorders, Why ____ University?
Master’s Communication Science and Disorders The University of ____’s Master's Program in Communication Sciences and Disorders is my first choice among graduate programs for several reasons, including the location and the sheer excellence of your program. I hope to begin in the spring of 2020, working towards certification as a Speech-Language Pathologist. ____ is my hometown, U__ has been my academic community since I earned my undergraduate degree at U__, and I love my university. Thus, I hope to complete my graduate work in the exact location where my routines and resources are well established and organized. I appreciate UXX’s innovative technology and your mission to produce leaders that positively and progressively impact the community, which aligns perfectly with my personal and clinical goals. Master’s Communication Science and Disorders Personal Statement for Grad School I appreciate how U__ ranks among the top one hundred universities in the US and the diversity of your faculty and student body. I am also favorably impressed with the substantial number, more than two hundred, of internship/practicum sites in the ____ area. Your program's strengths complement my diverse background, education, and experiences. By earning my master's at U__, I am convinced that I will be fully ready to begin making my maximum professional contribution upon graduation from your program. I keenly look forward to decades to come helping individuals, especially children, to deal successfully with voice disorders. I sing and have done so professionally upon occasion. Thus, I have an advanced appreciation of voice, and I believe that this will help drive me to excellence. Along with children, I look forward to directing my practice to other singers, actors, broadcasters, etc., people for whom voice issues have immediate professional relevance. I finished my BA in Radio/TV degree and have worked, among other things, as a professional performer during the seven years I have been out of college. With extensive training and experience, much of it in voice, I look forward to making effective use of my talents and helping others develop their vocal capacity. For the past couple of years, I have been taking the classes online at UXX that I need to fulfill the prerequisites for your program. Making a lasting impact on individual lives by helping clients develop their voices as fully as possible, I thrive on collaboration with other professionals in the ongoing search for creative responses to challenges. My passion for voice goes back to an incredibly early age when I first began singing. Music has always been part of my life, and it led me to actively be involved in the performing arts throughout my academic career and continue to act after my graduation, both in film and on stage. As a performer in the Orlando area, I became fascinated by this incredible instrument's capabilities and the many ways the voice can produce a beautiful sound. Communication Science and Disorders Statement of Purpose Samples My basic understanding of the anatomy of the vocal tract and how it is used to create sound will be helpful to me as a voice therapist. I was fortunate enough to have a teacher who had retired from her opera career in New York City and mentored me for some time, bringing out the best in my vocal abilities and protecting and nurturing my voice despite the rigorous and constant demands of performing. Long intrigued by how humans manipulate voice to convey emotion and express ideas, I am a natural for the field of SLP. This was confirmed when I shadowed an SLP professional working with children and, later, a voice pathologist who performed with various patients needing voice therapy. Some of my favorite classes have included foreign languages, and I excelled in Spanish in high school and Italian in college. I continue to practice my Spanish hoping that mastering Spanish will benefit my capacity for professional service, especially as a volunteer helping children from underserved families. I consider voice to be such a blessing and have been highly motivated by my study of the prevalence of speech and voice disorders and the subsequent reduction of quality of life. My central long-term goal is to become a speech-language pathologist, increasingly specializing in voice disorders and eventually having my practice. I seek to harness my great passion for communication through singing with my desire to help others who have lost or whose voices are underdeveloped, agents damaged by improper technique or overuse. The ability to treat those who have lost their voices would be a special honor for me as a performing artist who understands and has genuine compassion for those who experience difficulties with vocalization. In addition to my efforts in the academic and professional worlds, I am also a volunteer with Harvest Time International. This non-profit organization sells low-cost food and household items to those living in poverty. I've done community theater in addition to singing, playing the ukulele, going outdoors, enjoying nature, swimming, and reading. I place an extremely high priority on ethical and professional codes of conduct. I will maintain the highest standards of conduct in all situations to fulfill our professional challenges and duties – always working as a team, collaborating to provide the highest quality of care possible for our patients, thereby safeguarding the integrity of our profession. I know I can be successful in this field for many reasons. I have already taken several advanced science prerequisites and scored near the top of my class due to my passion and dedication to succeed, confirming this is the right pathway. I am also finishing my certification as a registered behavioral tech to better prepare me for working with children, many of whom have autism and other developmental disabilities. I’m excited about being a part of the spring 2020 cohort at the University of XXXX and the prospect of being part of the advancements being made at UXX in research into communication disorders. It would be a special privilege to have the opportunity to participate in a study into vocal health and conditions under the supervision of Dr. XXXX, whose work I especially admire. I thank you for considering my application to your program. Master’s Communication Science and Disorders
- Healthcare Administration Fellowship Personal Statement
Healthcare Administration Fellowship Personal Statement of Purpose Sample For the past seven years, I have maintained a conceptual continuity in my professional and academic pursuit of quality service to the healthcare systems of New York. The ____ Medical Center provided me with a working environment like that of ____ Medical Center, as both serve as campuses for colleges of medicine. I have gained mastery of managing several projects simultaneously, working directly with insurance companies, and coordinating procedures and authorizations on behalf of the Director of Neuro-ophthalmology. I have dealt extensively and successfully with various issues in operational effectiveness to enhance the excellence of services provided. While ____ is one of NYC’s finest hospitals, ____ is a leader on the national level. Healthcare Administration Fellowship Personal Statement of Purpose Examples, Writing and Editing Throughout my time with ____ Health Partners of ____ Hospital, I continued to work in an academically affiliated environment and had the privilege of serving as a departmental director. As I was completing my BS in Business Administration and later my MBA, my responsibilities grew, training and supervising employees, increasing the amount of time I could dedicate to more advanced projects, especially researching viable funding opportunities for future research. I was dealing with issues many healthcare administrators deal with, such as working with regulatory readiness issues for special FDA and IRB projects, along with budget and human resources issues. Recently, I have been screening vendors, to decide which new products and services fit best with our department’s aims as well as providing compilations of data for the Department of Health. I am actively involved with the American College of Healthcare Executives and Health Leaders of New York, helping to organize conferences and lectures. I give back to the community by volunteering my time with the American Cancer Society and Lambda Theta Epsilon sorority. Healthcare Administration Fellowship Personal Statement Writing Help XXXX Medical Center’s Fellowship program of study is simply the most elite program of study in the field of healthcare administration in the country. The number of fellowships awarded annually is reassuringly small, giving me great confidence that my future as a leader in the field is all but guaranteed. Combined with this is the global reputation of XXXX as a national leader in healthcare which speaks of an unparalleled academic experience in a setting filled with real-world experiences and opportunities for professional development. While my professional experiences have been highly preparatory in terms of the challenge and opportunity to work with the Fellowship program, I need additional guidance in three principal areas: the improvement of healthcare performance; operational effectiveness; and ambulatory services. Through an academic relationship with ____, I will be better equipped to deal with the business side of healthcare, to address the more pressing issues of expanding healthcare systems and services while reducing the cost to the patient. At the same time, I will be a more effective leader in my community, volunteering in preventative medicine and education. My MBA combined with relevant experience in the healthcare industry will aid me invaluably in your program and my career, and enrich the experience of my classmates, as well. There are countless opportunities in the field of healthcare administration, and standing in the middle of it, one cannot see its edges. Being selected for your distinguished Fellowship program would enable and inspire me to earn a Ph.D. Degree in my field. Healthcare Administration Fellowship Personal Statement














