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Writing and Editing Personal Statement of Purpose Help, Service, Samples by Dr. Robert Edinger
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Dr Robert Edinger

About Me

Many of my clients have written to me to let me know that they had been accepted and to thank me for helping with their Personal Statement or Statement of Purpose. I believe that my work often results in acceptance because I draft/edit statements that contain the requisite elements of community spirit and personal character, on the one hand, and the celebration of diversity on the other. This serves to provide a slight edge to many successful applicants, helping them to stand out from their closest competitors. The anonymous examples posted on my site are several years old and are the Statements of people originally from all over the world. When faced with many more applicants than space available, and with many applicants having more-or-less similar grades and examination scores, the Statement is the only basis upon which to make the decision of who will be accepted and who will not. 

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The samples posted on this web site are anonymous and always more than two years old at the time of posting.

Applying for graduate school can be a daunting process. It's not just about having a stellar academic record, glowing recommendations, and a polished application packet. While those elements are undoubtedly important, there's one key factor that often goes overlooked but can significantly impact your chances of getting admitted: fit. In this article, we'll explore why fit is crucial and how to ensure your Statement of Purpose (SoP) includes this vital component.

The Power of Fit

Imagine this scenario: You have a perfect GPA, outstanding letters of recommendation, and an impressive resume, but you've applied to a graduate program in a department where the faculty's research interests have no connection to your own. You're passionate about studying smoking cessation, but the department's expertise lies in areas like teen pregnancy, cancer prevention, obesity prevention, and aging. Despite your excellent credentials, your application may be at a disadvantage.

Why? Because fit matters. It's not just about you fitting the program; it's also about your research interests aligning with what the department is currently focusing on. Graduate committees are not only evaluating your potential as a student but also considering how well you will integrate into the existing research landscape. If your research interests are in a different universe from what the department is actively involved in, it can be challenging for faculty to mentor you effectively.

How to Achieve Fit in Your Statement of Purpose

So, how do you ensure your application reflects this all-important fit? Here's a step-by-step guide:

  1. Research the Department: Before even starting your SoP, research the department thoroughly. What are the faculty's research interests? What projects are they currently working on? This information is often available on the department's website or in published faculty profiles.

  2. Identify Overlapping Interests: Once you've identified the department's research focus, find areas where your interests align. Look for topics, themes, or approaches that resonate with your academic and research goals.

  3. Include a Fit Paragraph: In your SoP, dedicate a paragraph to explaining how your interests complement the department's ongoing research. Articulate why you're drawn to the program based on shared research goals. Make a strong connection between your academic passions and what the department has to offer.

  4. Demonstrate Passion: Convey your passion for the department's areas of research. Describe how you can contribute to and benefit from these research initiatives. Passion is compelling, and it shows that you've done your homework.

  5. Avoid Generic Statements: Avoid generic statements that could apply to any graduate program. Instead, be specific about why this particular department is the perfect fit for you. Generalized SoPs are unlikely to stand out.

  6. Highlight Your Potential Contribution: Emphasize how your research aligns with the department's goals and how it can potentially contribute to ongoing projects. Your research should be seen as an asset to the department's work.

  7. Proofread and Refine: Your SoP should be polished and error-free. Any inconsistencies or inaccuracies can detract from your message. Review and refine your statement to ensure it effectively communicates the fit between your interests and the department's research.


Your Statement of Purpose is your opportunity to not only showcase your academic qualifications but also to demonstrate your fit within the department. Remember, fit can be the deciding factor in your graduate school application. A strong SoP that clearly conveys how your research interests align with the department's ongoing work can significantly boost your chances of admission.

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