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The samples posted on this web site are anonymous and always more than two years old at the time of posting.
If you are thinking about using my service but are not yet convinced, I invite you to send your rough draft to my email, drrobertedinger@gmail.com, so that I can edit and enhance your first paragraph at no charge or obligation. Most of my potential clients who receive the first paragraph, go on to commission me to work on the entire statement.
Graduate School Personal Statement Samples, Statement of Purpose Writing and Editing, Professional Service
Business, Accounting, and Finance
Sample 1st Paragraph, MBA Sustainable Business and Innovation
I earned my undergraduate degree in Civil Engineering. As I have matured, however, I have realized that my passion lies much more in the direction of environmental than civil engineering, given my profound appreciation for everything clean and green. Most specifically, I want to focus on innovation and do so from the perspective of business so as to make that innovation as sustainable as possible. Thus, I feel strongly that I am an especially good fit with the distinguished Master’s Degree Program in Sustainable Business and Innovation at XXXX University.
Sample 1st Paragraph, MBA Marketing
I see the field of marketing as a bridge between product and consumer, the life blood of business, and the glue that binds them together. Hence, I have chosen the career path of becoming an expert in the area of consumer perceptions. A young Indian woman, curious and creative, I want to think outside the box about marketing and come up with creative solutions for novel problems. Hence, I hope to be selected to my first choice for graduate school, the MSc Program in International Marketing at XXXX University.